November 17, 2005
I Write About Moral Reprobates
. . . too often. I'm starting to get looks in my writer's group. People blink a lot and gently suggest that I'm starting to lose the readers' sympathies. By which they mean that I've lost theirs.
Hm. I happen to find my monsters lovable as all get out. Second only to Maurice Sendak's.
Everyone's just mad that my characters have more sex than theirs. Hey! Could there be a song in that?
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Frank Miller has lovable monsters, and monsters you can really hate... and they make his stuff into movies.
Posted by: Zendo Deb at November 18, 2005 04:02 AM (S417T)
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I'm still thinking about that queen bee song. A nice song.
Of course, queen bees aren't actual moral reprobates at all...which was the whole point.
Posted by: k at November 18, 2005 04:55 PM (6krEN)
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November 03, 2005
Ye Olde Crime Novel
I took the gauze out of my mouth long enough to read a few pages aloud at Writer's Group tonight. This was one of my "shocker" chapters, and people were . . . well, shocked. That might be good, but if I choose to keep that scene I have to throw in some hints that it might be coming, and consider carefully whether people will be as interested in the character if I continue along this path.
I'd like to keep it, though it definitely gives the tale an even darker turn. But I should consider nuking it. If I do that, I have to figure out how to find a substitute for the final reveal at the end, or whether that's even necessary. If I do my job right, the main plot twist might be enough.
It's been a year and a half, and none of these people has yet articulated what I long to hear: "there, there. That really sucks. You can't write. Why don't you burn this sorry excuse for a manuscript, go home, and take a hot bath? By the way—this isn't your fault. Most likely it's your mother's. Or your husband's. Or perhaps an ex-boyfriend's. Don't worry about it."
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I cannot believe you made it to the group in that condition.
Hah! Maybe you should have tried out the Vamp Do on them, instead of at the coffee shop.
OTOH, sometimes being in that post-surgery altered state of mind and emotion can help you look at things from a whole new angle.
eg, letting you examine and expound on that self-defeatism thing...
I've been sitting around trying to remember if there's anyone I've ever known who didn't have a good dose of that in them. We all seem to do battle with it at some point.
The only ones I could think of who lacked that, people I've personally known I mean, were sociopaths.
Posted by: k at November 05, 2005 03:21 PM (ywZa8)
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